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The line graph gives information on how many people visited four
museums
 in different countries from 1980 to 2015. Overall, the data reveal that the Louvre
museum
 was the most popular, followed in
second
 place by the Vatican
museums
 whose
number
 of
visitors
 rocketed to almost the same figure for the former by the end of the period shown.
On the other hand
, the other two
museum
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museums
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 failed to
attracted
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attract
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 more
visitors
 over
this
 period than that of in the
first
 year given. The salient feature is the greatest rise in the
number
 of
visitors
 to the Vatican
museums
, with almost 9
million
 people visiting them in 2015 compared to almost half as many in 1980.
This
also
 reached roughly the same figures for the Louvre
museum
 from 2010 onwards. Turning to the Louvre
museum
, the figures followed an upward trend,
however
, in 1995, there was a gradual fall in the
number
. It
then
 increased for the remaining period, peaking at 9
million
.
Finally
, moving on to the rest, Shenzhen and London Science
museums
, what stands out is the
number
 of
visitors
 to them were the same from 1990 to 2000, declining slightly to around 3
million
. From
then
 on, the
number
 of people visiting London Science
museums
 continued to drop to 2
million
 in 2015.
By contrast
, the figures for the Shenzhen
museum
 went back up to where it started (about 4
million
).
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