The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree and disagree?

#growth #shops #towns #cities

After preschool and before university, we have just single-sex education in my country, so based on my experience, maybe I'm a good candidate to discuss the advantages and disadvantages. In the beginning, the problem with children who educate in one single-sex

school

begins with they being isolated in

school

. I mean, they can't socialise with the opposite gender. In my eyes, the

school

should reflect real life.

Hence

, in real life we work together, we live together, apart from

this

aspect, they especially boys get stuck on their stereotype which is willing to do things based on what society expects from them, without considering their talent or opinion and

this

situation

also

true for girls. We have less evidence about the advantages of single-sex education;

however

, I can mention some of them. Boys and girls will be less under pressure, or they won't have to worry about saving face in front of the opposite gender; on top of that they can easily talk about topics which are not controversial issues;

therefore

, it's possible that they can be themselves in their class, apart from

this

kind of

school

may be a good choice for a parent who has a religious background.

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree and disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices, to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Health services are a basic necessity. However, private companies have made them quite costly for ordinary individuals. Do the advantages of private health care outweigh its disadvantages?

Traffic congestion is becoming problomatic inmajor cities what solutions can be suggest to help to solve the problem

school ahould be stopp using books for teaching as they find them boring , use film tv and computer instead. to what extent do you agree qith this

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?