Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

It is noteworthy that, some
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categorised
human beings
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religions
religious
or national and the quality by their
dress
code. In fact,
dress
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emphasis
once
culture
and beliefs to the world. Owing to the working
culture
also
have various
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dress codes
dress code
based on their occupations.
Therefore
, I'm giving my opinions by agreeing to the above statement.
Firstly
each and every
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in
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globe
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has
their
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own cultural habits, which matching their geographical locations and
also
to the
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weather
conditions. Most followers of
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also
having
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unique
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identity.
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matter of fact that Muslim's, Hindu's, African tribe's and
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monks have
unparelled
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unparalleled
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with their
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. owing to
this
, clothes could
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to identify each
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and
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religions
religion
in most times.
In addition
, global economic competition drives companies and their employees
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to a different level.
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, most
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the
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workplaces
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work places
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modify their
dress
codes to emphasise their working
culture
.
For example
, lawyers wear full suits, most of the doctors wear white clothes and military persons wear camo
flague
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plague
flag
flags
to express their line of work. In that case, we can understand the
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of each clothes to identify their category of occupations.
Finally
,
dress
codes are the best identification factor for each
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,
culture
,
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and line of works.
Therefore
, once
dress
code doing a significant to
identifiy
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identify
each and every citizen variants.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • garments
  • traditional attire
  • sartorial choices
  • expressive style
  • cultural identity
  • psychological implications
  • non-verbal cues
  • globalization
  • perceptions
  • professional demeanor
  • societal norms
  • economic constraints
  • subcultures
  • fashion movements
  • individualism
  • stereotype
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