Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Some individuals believe that finishing
university
is the most convenient way
to find an outstanding job, by contrast
, others think that is
more relevant to gain experience and develop basic work
skills
. Surely is important to have higher education as well as to develop soft skills
. The most important thing in the market of jobs is to have a bit of both side, knowledge
and interpersonal skills
.
Completing university
is, for sure, the best way
to get a good job. Moreover
, a great number of employers look for graduated students and sometimes it is better if the university
is one of the top-notch. Additionally
studying for 3 years or more enable the student to gain confidence as well as personal skills
. In fact
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,fact
university
is a place where you learn how to work
together (such
as in presentations) and to work
alone and solve your own problems (such
as during essays or exams).
On the other hand
, going to work
without ever been to a university
course means probably have a lack of knowledge
but it doesn’t necessarily mean scarcity of intelligence. Besides
it is more likely these people would develop soft skills
meanwhile they are learning how to work
in a specific field, and as a matter of fact
they could be very good workers. Add a comma
,fact
Furthermore
, they could be more independent than the others because they started to work
a
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away
way
earlier.
To conclude, in my ,opinion both sides are important to make a person more conscious and confident about the goals he can achieve. The development of soft skills
and the improvement in knowledge
are important on the same level, could be impossible for anybody to work
without any interpersonal communication skills
whereas having zero knowledge
would surely impact the way
you operate.Submitted by ubbialilaria on
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