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Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

#university #education #job #hand #people #skills
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Some individuals believe that finishing
university
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 is the most convenient
way
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 to find an outstanding job,
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, others think
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 more relevant to gain experience and develop basic
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skills
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. Surely is important to have higher education as well as to develop soft
skills
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. The most important thing in the market of jobs is to have a bit of both side,
knowledge
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 and interpersonal
skills
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. Completing
university
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 is, for sure, the best
way
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 to get a good job.
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, a great number of employers look for graduated students and sometimes it is better if the
university
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 is one of the top-notch.
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 studying for 3 years or more enable the student to gain confidence as well as personal
skills
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. In
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 the
university
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 is a place where you learn how to
work
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 together (
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 as in presentations) and to
work
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 alone and solve your own problems (
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 as during essays or exams).
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, going to
work
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 without ever been to a
university
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 course means probably have a lack of
knowledge
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 but it doesn’t necessarily mean scarcity of intelligence.
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 it is more likely these people would develop soft
skills
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 meanwhile they are learning how to
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 in a specific field, and as a matter of
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 they could be very good workers.
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, they could be more independent than the others because they started to
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 earlier. To conclude, in my ,opinion both sides are important to make a person more conscious and confident about the goals he can achieve. The development of soft
skills
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 and the improvement in
knowledge
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 are important on the same level, could be impossible for anybody to
work
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 without any interpersonal communication
skills
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 whereas having zero
knowledge
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 would surely impact the
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 you operate.
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Your opinion

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • theoretical knowledge
  • specialized training
  • networking
  • baseline requirement
  • financial burden
  • hands-on experience
  • practical skills
  • soft skills
  • dynamic job market
  • entrepreneur
  • formal education
  • portfolio
  • hybrid approach
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