Some people think that environment problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

There are many environmental problems around the world and the impact is extremely high. A major number of people are claiming that

this

issue should be

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with internationally;

while

others believe that it would be easier to deal with them nationally. In my opinion, there are many benefits with both national and international

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in cause handle with the

environment

so if both are involved

then

there is a high chance of controlling. On

one

hand ,the

environment

is not just about

one

nation

, if anything happens to the

environment

it will affect it globally.

Due to

this

reason, the officials should consider the environmental issue as a global issue.

For instance

,

last

year in Australia, there was a huge bush fire and the pollution that was produced travelled to the nearest country,which is New Zealand. The air pollution,which was generated from the bush fire,

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damaged the ozone layer in the surrounding region and it eventually

causes

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global warming.

On the other hand

, if

one

nation

starts doing the controlling measure,

which

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will encourage the neighbouring countries to do it.

However

, there are many benefits that can get the particular

nation

.

For example

, if the

nation

stops using fuel products,

then

it can control

co2

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emissions. Indeed, the co2 is a major culprit in rising temperatures,

hence

the direct advantages of reducing fossil fuels could improve the atmosphere. In conclusion, I strongly believe that environmental issues

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belong to any

nation

,and it

also

has many advantages if all the nations work together on similar issues. Global warming is a main cause

to

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the

environment

and it can be spread from

one

nation

to

other

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nations if any outbreaks happen like wildfires.