Some people think that the goverment is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree?

There are a variety of opinions on whether or not the government should allocate funds to

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.While some claim that these financial resources can be used in another sector far better, I personally believe that spending

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importance by another part. Admittedly, I am certain that there are many reasons why spending a budget on

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is necessary for governments.

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of all, different types of

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types of

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as cinema or painting

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have

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impact on

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improvement of humanity. Having success in these major not only can introduce the culture of a nation to the world

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enhancement and creating

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, if governments pay less attention to the

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, it may have

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and they do not have enough motivation to do their best.

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, psychologists believe that using

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can boost individual mood .In industrial

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people have many difficulties and financial problems so they may not have enough finance for entertainment. Running a music

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exhibition with some free activity for all the family members

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as painting, dancing and learning a branch of

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related to their will in the holidays can lead to a dynamic

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, It is true that there are many crucial parts that governments should give them an appropriate amount of financial support ,

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healthcare system and education. Indeed, the more these

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of

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would be strong, the greater the chance of well-being guaranteed among people.But, cutting down

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finance is not a suitable way for solving these problems. Increasing the tax of some private companies based on their income may be a better solution. In conclusion, spending money

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important portions of a country

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as health and education is vital,but I believe

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money should not come from reducing the share of

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and it

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importance for having a mentally healthy individual.