Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

There are different opinions about reasons for
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in a foreign
language
. Some people think that it would be useful just for
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and working
in
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overseas. While others like me argue that learn a foreign
language
has another reason too. Some people believe that knowing
foreign
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language
should be vital to travel and work
in
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overseas because in these situations you have to communicate with people in that
country
. Without
this
skill it is more likely to face problems during your trip, as well as
this
, learning the
language
of a
country
where you want to work there, brings more benefits and opportunities
such
as finding
better
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job with more salary due to your communication skill.
Besides
this
, if you want to trade with a
country
, being able to speak their
language
would be essential for negotiation,
otherwise
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they may cheat you and get you in trouble.
On the other hand
, despite work and
travel
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there are different
purpose
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to learn
foreign
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language
. some persons are keen to be familiar with a culture of
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society through learning their
language
. In
this
way
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they can find friends and establish a close relationship without going
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country
.
In addition
, students who want to continue their education or immigrate overseas
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to take in the
language
of their destination
country
.
Moreover
, most of the cutting-edge technology in various fields are published in English,
therefore
it would be really indispensable to learn
this
language
to take advantage of
this
science. In
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I believe that
,
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however
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learn
foreign
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a foreign
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language
is necessary for
traveling
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and working targets, there
are
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another motivation to it
such
as awareness of cultural diversity, progress in education level and gain more knowledge.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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