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The world is experiencing a dramatic increase in population. This is causing problems not only for the poor in undeveloped countries but also for industrialized and developing nations. Describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes, and suggest at least one possible solution.

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It is believed by some people that it is beneficial to not withheld most of the knowledge in research, business and academics while others have an opinion that some
information
 is too precious to be shared freely.
Personally
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 I support both views as both are right in their own context. All
information
except for
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that can cause destruction to
the
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society
 should be shared to make the world a better place to live. Publishing data can help brilliant individuals to analyze it so that it can be innovated
upon
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further
. New techniques and technology can be invented. Spreading intelligence can lead to more scientific discoveries and new fields of research can be explored.
Also
 circulating knowledge freely can educate more people in our
society
.
This
 increase can lead to more young and brilliant individuals contributing more to
society
. There can
also
 be economic benefits as costs can be brought down as there will be no need to spend money on the problems that are already solved does no need to be solved again and again due to lack of
information
Finally
, we come to the conclusion that the
information
 which can wreak havoc to
the
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society
 should be withheld from both public and private eyes as
this
 can be weaponized against the other groups and can cause mass destruction.
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