The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advances in technology which can prevent and solve crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In
this
modern era, technology
become
a part of daily life. We use Add a missing verb
has become
technology
in schools, offices, and homes etc. and now it's make
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it makes
great
impact on criminal activities. Now numerous Add an article
a great
of
cases were not solved in the past because we don't have the high-Change preposition
apply
technology
but now it is easy to solve them. I am agree
that Change the verb form
agree
technology
help
to minimise Change the form of the verb
helps
crimal
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criminal
activies
, Correct your spelling
activities
however
, it is also
rise cyber
crimes
.
To begin
with, In the past, police records show numerous of
robbery cases but now there are drastic changes we can see that because of the Change preposition
apply
survelliance
system. Correct your spelling
surveillance
For instance
, today in every malls
, shops, have CCTV CAMERAS, which help to prevent Change to a singular noun
mall
from
robbery or shoplifter because police can easily find them with the help of CCTV footage and Change preposition
apply
also
if people know they are monitering
, they obey the law and stay away from unlawful activities. Correct your spelling
monitoring
Futhermore
, speed Correct your spelling
Furthermore
camers
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cameras
also
help to prevention in traffic crime
activities
In contrast
, technology
really
helpful in so many Add a missing verb
is really
sector
but it Change to a plural noun
sectors
is
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also brings
also
bring new crimes
. For example
, Cyber
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Cybercrime
crime
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crimes
nowdays
are very popular. There Correct the word
nowadays
are
Change the verb form
is
number
of cases we hear about related to Change the article
a number
the number
cyber
Correct your spelling
cybercrimes
crimes
. Therefore
government makes cyber
cell
for these types of Fix the agreement mistake
cells
crimes
. Today so many hyjackers
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hijackers
hyjack
bank accounts and transfer all money to their accounts and so many are not arrested since Correct your spelling
hijack
police
can't find any proof of it. Add an article
the police
Moreover
, so many security system
hacked by Change to a plural noun
systems
terroriest
and it harm Correct your spelling
terrorist
terrorists
nation
security.
In conclusion, Replace the word
national
technology
is one of the cause
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causes
the
Change preposition
of the
cyber-
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cyber-crime
crime
rising, although
it also
a
vital role Add a missing verb
has a
for
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in
future
since it is helpful in Correct article usage
the future
crime
rates to we can't ignore this
fact and modern crime
people can handle cybercrime because they are smart.Submitted by shikhasejwal2 on
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