Nowadays young people are leaving their homes from rural areas to study or work in the cities. Why does this happen? Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

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There has been a growing

trend

in the migration of youngsters from rural areas to metropolises for the acquirement of academic knowledge and competitive vacancies.

This

essay aims to examine the major cause for

this

phenomenon and discusses the pros and cons associated with

this

change on an objective stance. The rationales for

this

trend

lie in the belief that central

cities

are the only place that you can go to increase your living standards. There is no denying the fact that metropolises offer a greater chance of receiving better studies and jobs due to their high density of education complexes and top-quality companies and corporates.

This

, in turn, can increase your possibilities in finding a more suitable and diverse workplace or university for higher academic pursuits.

In addition

, living in

cities

can provide you

the

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access to adequate facilities and infrastructure

such

as public transports, health care services, entertainment

centers

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, and so forth, which can hardly find in rural areas.

On the other hand

this

ongoing

trend

, to some extent, can increase the disparity in the

labor

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force for rural developments. Young generations may find themselves unfamiliar with the rural environments after finishing their education or find a suitable job in the

cities

and refuse to go back to their homeland.

In addition

, the influx of people from surrounding areas might put pressure on the environments in the central

cities

. The city’s infrastructure may not cope well and result in the collapse of the environment processing systems

such

as drainage and garbage collecting facilities. Despite certain advantages mentioned above, my stance is that

such

trend

could be a social tragedy if not be firmly regulated and lack support from the government.

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Summary
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To conclude
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Finally
In a nutshell
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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Nowadays young people are leaving their homes from rural areas to study or work in the cities. Why does this happen? Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

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