Many parents feel that cell phones are harmful to children, while others do not. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Currently, The inventors invented the telephone in many appearances , brands , and ranges of prices. The price is dipped down from the
last
30 decades therefore
people
are able to purchase and possess easier. In this
generation, most parents give the phone
to their kids to track and contact them after school. Even, the phone
is an amazing invention but it is one of the unhealthy factors and affect unexpected behaviour from their children.
On one hand, Mobile phones
let people
find more information including, the knowledge they desire to know from many search engines. For example
, Google, Yahoo, Bing , etc. Moreover
, people
can interact and share with each other comfortably on social media such
as Facebook, Instagram and so on. Accordingly
, most children get their cell phone
from their parents and use it as a common to contact their friends and unnecessary to go outside to meet their friends anymore.
On the other hand
, overusing mobile phones
also
attribute adolescents addict to their phones
all day, spend too much on the mobile phone
, stuck with social media and care about the appearance or picture on their sns. Inside the phones
, It also
has a mobile game that persuades teens to addict to the game on the phones
rather than spending their time studying or interacts with others. Using too much phone
not only make children have severe health conditions such
as bad eyesight and do not get enough sleep but also
contributes the youth to express aggressive behaviour. According to a number of research,teenagers spend their time with cell phones
around 8 hours a day and the researcher said that young people
who addict to the phone
tend to have more aggressive behaviour rather than youth who use phones
appropriately.
In a nutshell, I believe that phones
are able to affect juveniles in a negative way rather than one positive. I do believe the phone
is an invention that changes and makes the world move toward the future. Yet, users must use the mobile appropriate way and limit their time with the phone
. To avoid numerous harmful effects from the cell phone
.Submitted by milkyway on
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