The Essay Topic: The tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion clothes and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree ?

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Nowadays, we can see that
people
tend to learn from other
people
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many aspects of their life. I totally agree with
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opinion and in
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i
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will explain my thought. The biggest reason for
this
can be explained by some
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researches about human's
psycholist
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psychologist
. It has been proved that most
people
want to be different from the crowd, which comes from the fear of being judged and tricked by other
people
. Another thing that creates
this
phenomenom
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phenomenon
is
trend
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. The younger is easily affected by
this
, making them
to
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follow a big number of
people
that
is
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pursuing viral
stuffs
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stuff
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.
For instance
, whenever
Iphone
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iPhone
releases a new flagship product, it will become a big trend that
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people
try to get it as soon as possible.
Beside
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, the marketing strategies of big companies and brands are
also
the reason that
lead
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to
people
immitating
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imitating
one another
stuffs
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stuff
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. In conclusion,
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agree that nowadays,
people
are obsessed with the idea of being the same as other
people
.
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