Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and diet. Others however believe that governments should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion
In recent years, the rate of diseases has increased dramatically because of bad nutrition and fewer activities
as a result
of modern lifestyle. It is an argument that people
should take care of themselves while some believe
, the government should responsible for improving healthiness in societies.
Replace the word
belief
However
, healthy nutrition and exercises are essential parts of our lives that help to reduce some diseases like diabetes and heart attacks. One of the best approaches is that an individual worry about their diets and health
. Although
there are some people
like children and elderlies that can not take care by own selves, their loved ones can be responsible for them. for example
, people
should have a program for consuming more vegetables and fruits individually and encourage their families especially their children to consuming too. In addition
, when every single person does more physical activities like do sports or even walking to the work, they can inspire others accordingly
it is not only beneficial for their health
but also
can let to level up of health
in their serunding.
As I mentioned, If people
do not take care of their diet and health
which may follow by increasing diseases, it means, insurance budget will increase. Hence
, authorities should tackle this
phenomenon. To illustrate, the government should invest to modify the sports facilities and build some free tuition gyms for people
and even decreasing the tax on healthy foods instead
of, spending money on people
insurance or building hospitals. In addition
, the government can encourage people
to have healthy life via advertising somewhere like a TV program.
To conclude, in my idea, an individual and authorities ought to corporate for having good societies in terms of rate of health
because it is beneficial for all parts of society.Submitted by mgolnari6 on
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