Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In today's modern world, we are facing more
the
environmental Correct article usage
apply
issues
than before. While some believe that the main climate Use synonyms
issues
are related Use synonyms
with
the lack of specific plants or animals, others think that many significant factors are involved in Change preposition
to
such
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This
essay will explore both arguments and gives some details about why other measurements are more crucial to preserve our planet.
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surroundings
are
due to the lack of some species or Correct your spelling
area
vegitation
. The reason is that generally plants and more Correct your spelling
vegetation
specially
trees are responsible to create oxygen on the earth and without them not only we will lose the beauty of our nature, but Replace the word
especially
also
we will face Linking Words
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such
environmental Correct quantifier usage
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issues
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such
as air pollution, which may bring some diseases Linking Words
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For example
, there are huge amounts of tropical forests in Linking Words
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, and daily we are witnessing the Correct article usage
the Amazon
rate
of deforestation Use synonyms
specially
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especially
at
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in
this
area is increasing significantly, resulting in a dramatic decline in producing oxygen in the world. The higher Linking Words
rate
of deforestation, the less producing clean air on the earth.
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However
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there are several causes for Add a comma
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such
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issues
in
our planet. These days, many countries are generating Co2, resulted in rising usage of fossil fuels, which may lead to air pollution and Change preposition
on
thus
they directly Linking Words
involve
in Change the form of the verb
involved
global
warming Correct article usage
the global
rate
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
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the
they
quality of petroleum is another issue, which consumes daily with a million Correct your spelling
the
of
cars, Change preposition
apply
may
increase the level of carbon emission. Correct pronoun usage
which may
Finally
, many factories put their wastes in the rivers and oceans, which has led Linking Words
in
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to
death
of many marine animals. Correct article usage
the death
As a result
, human involvements are more influential on those problems.
In conclusion, Linking Words
although
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lack
of some kinds of animals and trees have a direct correlation with environmental Correct article usage
the lack
issues
, in my view other measurements Use synonyms
such
as quality of fuels, increasing Linking Words
rate
of non-renewable energies, and leaving out the Use synonyms
rubbishes
in the water may have more detrimental effects.Change the verb form
rubbish
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