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The media should include more stories which report good news. What extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, we have noticed that media is more focused on telecasting the negative stories as compared to the positive
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. I completely agree with
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 essay, I will support my view with examples. One of the major advantages of showing
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 reports is that they are more attractive and impactful and the majority of the public enjoy watching
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 kind of information.
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, if a channel is showing the
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 related to war,
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 people choose
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 over education details. In
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 cases, media houses prefer to go with the sad
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 cause they achieve more target rating points and
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 actually helps them to grow their
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 rapidly. In many
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channels
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, we can observe that they mostly telecast shows where they can pick a sensitive topic over which they can have a debate. I have seen many
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 where they invite candidates from opposite parties and they fight on various different problems but unfortunately they do not reach to any conclusion or a solution.
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, reporting negative
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 can be very disturbing to the crowd. During the corona pandemic, coronavirus becomes a hot topic all over the world.
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, the audience started to follow
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 but later on, it became so stressful that they
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 started avoiding the
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.
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,
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 introduced a new segment where they only show positive
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 to attract customers. In newspapers, mostly the entire page reports the
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 which is related to corruption, murders, and robberies. when we read
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 in the morning we manifest these things in our lives too.
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 we should have more positive
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 to have a happy mindset. To sum up, In order to maintain the balance,
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channels
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 should telecast both the
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 so that the society can become alert and stress-free at the same time.
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