Some people think that Zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others believe that Zoos are useful in protecting Wild animals. Discuss both points of views and give your opinion.

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There is a common belief that wild
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can be protected by
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and some people argue that animal welfare is being raised there, while other people claim that
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should be rescinded as they are unkind. While some assert that
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are the places where
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are taken care of and bred to preserve the endangered
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, I am concerned that it is unacceptable that nearly all of the wild
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are protected by
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just to abuse them for entertainment purposes only. On the one hand,
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can be useful for some particular purposes. It can be a home for those
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who lost their homes due to the global warming effects.
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, it can help the reproduction of the animal.
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, pandas cannot live in their habitats in the jungles. It might cause some trouble for them to reproduce and breed their young by nature but those who are in the
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can help them by keeping an eye on their health.
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, the populations of
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confined in the
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will increase and endangered
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would not go extinct.
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, it is devastating to acknowledge that
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are using rare
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of
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to get profit from visitors. For
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reason, the
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in the
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aren’t given enough food and they are trained harshly for entertainment and they are constrained not to be able to do some activities like in nature.
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, I went to the zoo two years ago. There, there was a white tiger which is one of the rarest creatures in our country.
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of giving it a balanced diet, the zookeepers didn’t even take care of it; not only that white tiger but the other
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are given less attention. To sum up,
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are the home for endangered
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and the place where endangered
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are protected and bred for the development of their population;
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, I am of the opinion that the confined
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are facing some problems for being abused to entertain the visitors for the profits of the
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and that inhumane acts should be prohibited.
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