Despise the advances made in agriculture many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done to solve this problem?

In the past 50

years

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we have seen a dramatic increase in the development of agricultural

methods

. Yet, many people from all over the world suffered from

the

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lack of nourishment. I think there are several reasons for

this

problem and

i

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believe there are some solutions to tackle it. I believe there are several reasons why individuals being hungry in many

countries

while

the

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industrial agriculture

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been raised in recent years.

First

of all, the development of agricultural industry occurred in developed

nations

which suitable sources of water and soil. in

fact

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when in

a

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society,

individual

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individuals

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understand the importance of enhancement of

this

filed

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they try to seek viable ways to empower it.

However

, in developing

countries

with

less

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fewer

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facilities and science of agriculture, providing these

methods

is not easy and they usually suffered from less

amount

of nutrition. Take

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the USA

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as a good example, when they found improvement of agricultural

methods

play an important role to have

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wealth and reach

country

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and providing sufficient

amount

of

food

for people who live in their cities is crucial so their best for finding bet

methods

of producing higher

amount

of

foods

while in many

countries

they do not accept

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and until they use traditional ways of producing

foods

.

This

is not only led to

insufficient

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amount

of vital

foods

,

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but

also

the price of

food

has been increased because they come from

others nation

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other nations

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.

As a result

in

such

developing country while they do not provide enough

vegetable

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vegetables

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and meets consuming

this

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this food

these foods

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foods

would be hard for consumers.

However

, there is several

remedy

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to tackle

this

problem.

first

of all, international

organization

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organizations

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related to providing

food

should have enough facilities and transportation system to transport

this elements

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from

countries

produced more than there need to poorer

nations

. If they do

this

job with less

amount

of financial resources, many people would porches them.

Secondly

, developed

nations

should transform their information and technologies to other

nations

with suitable natural sources and teach them to be independent by producing suitable types of

food

. The more they can be staying on their own feet, the greater the chance

of

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we can root out hungry among citizens. In summary, I believe there are

many

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cause

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for

this

question and if international societies try to solve

it

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hand- in hand it may be possible with solutions mentioned above.