Children’s education is expensive. In some countries, governments pay partly or all education fees. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

One fact which I believe to be absolutely pivotal is the fact that these days, educating your children is becoming an costly

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. While there are some countries

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support

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their citizens till higher

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. On the other side, some nations

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, it depends on the economy. Both arguments will discuss

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from the government

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either partly or fully always has an advantage to

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society. To commence with,

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is the primary right of any individual;

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, these days enrolling a child in an

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to get primary schooling is becoming expenses day by day. Private schools are charging heavy fees from parents;

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, considering the

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around the community, adults assume that private schools are better than

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as they do a complete development of a scholar.

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, they organise sports events, inter-state

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help a youngster to decide about their future career and make them

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competitive

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,doing higher studies

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require plenty amount of money

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as masters in any field.

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, it is well said higher learning

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luxcourious

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. On the flip side, there any many countries where the

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authorities

encourage

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to their people

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completely

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or partially. Canada is one of its

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, where the nation

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their citizens study fully till higher

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. Another example of it is India, where the government has opened public schools and

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free study, books, other

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education

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material to their public.

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can set rules and regulations by providing some discounts to weaker sections of our society to make it available for all. As the growth of an economy

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upon youth;

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, helping youngster to get

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excellent learning is vital. To conclude,

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schooling is becoming costly

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of the government is always an advantage which

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its

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disadvantage

of sharing percentage as partly or fully.