The first car appeared on the British roads in 1888. By the year 2000, there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion on the issue. Use your own experience or an example to support your idea.

The

number

of

cars

has been doubled year by year, causing several problems. Certain individuals think that encouragement of alternative ways of transport as well as international laws are required to restrict

excessive

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the excessive

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volume of

cars

. I am in complete agreement with

this

statement as it can alleviate traffic

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in the

country

and,

also

, current environmental problems. Fostering choices of transport rather than

cars

reduce traffic congestion. If

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the government

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provided a great quality of public transport for

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citizens, they would choose

this

over their

cars

because it offers convenient and price-effective.

In addition

, international laws that limit the

number

of car possession even lower

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amount of

cars

on the road. In Thailand, almost every people own at least one personal

car

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because

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the government

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did not take any action and provide

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a proper

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alternative way for citizen and

this

makes traffic in the

country

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Furthermore

, the natural environment would be better by doing so. Acidic gases, that destroy the atmosphere and cause global warming,

such

as carbon dioxide as well as noise pollution

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emitted by

cars

will be lowered;

hence

, the current global warming situation which many people concern

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alleviated.

Also

, in Thailand, there are both air and noise pollution,

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by

cars

, and

this

worsen

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the environment in the

country

. In conclusion,

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the government

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should encourage people to pick other options of commuting and control

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the number

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of car ownership to reduce

cars

on the roads and to toxic gases. At the end of the day, reducing

number

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of

cars

certainly makes a

country

more pleasant.