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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers and books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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As the World is quickly changing nowadays, I totally agree that the published newspapers and
books
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 will lose their popularity for major three reasons.
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, would be the
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up- to-date
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 messages that the products can convey. in
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 of newspapers, online ones will soon replace the published issues from now on. Judging from the time consuming before the publisher print and deliver them to the news agencies all over the country, the so-called "breaking news" would be
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yesterday's one by
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. for the
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, almost every writer revises the content in his
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 almost everything for the
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 version. Buying one at the book store or reading one at the library yields
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no guarantee for the latest version, while online
books
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 always have that benefit for you to review the edited content before deciding to purchase or rent them.
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 reason would be the convenience of accessing
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the needed data. No more waiting for the
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post man
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 or that newspaper boy nor walking to the kiosk to buy newspapers and the
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 you like. Now everything is in our hands, at our convenience, and it is so easy to search
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 you want to read. The latest
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 is that the cost of reading online publishing materials is tremendously lower than
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 the old-fashioned printed ones, unless you are a
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 collector, you might still want to buy some of them, but not all for sure. Welcome to the world of digital reading.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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