Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the worls. Why is this? What are the advantage and disadvantage of solar energy.

Our world is undergoing the issue of global warming,
then
in our ,
future
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it is indispensable to give up hemisphere gases and turn to solar
energy
which is a better
source
of power.
This
type of
energy
starts to become more popular around the world because every country must turn in green
energy
in order to face the increase in temperature.
This
essay intends to outline the benefits and drawbacks of
this
source
.
Firstly
,the main advantage is that
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energy
which comes from the sun is unlimited which is not the case with our actual diesel fuels, gas and more. Indeed
this
new
source
does not create waste that will stay on earth for billions of years.
For instance
, today
source
of electricity is provided by nuclear centrals which, thanks to the split of uranium nuclei, creates
this
power we use in our everyday lives.
However
, the trash which is created
are
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impossible to recycle
,
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or to do something with.
Then
, solar
energy
is obviously better because of the non-presence of
such
rubbish. On the other side,a possible
drawbacks
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is pollution. Indeed,
this
is not a perfect solution.
Thus
, some issues remain constants
such
as the presence of pollution, even if there
are
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less waste, there are anyway. To give a clear example, extracting the silicium ( which is the
first
matter to make photovoltaïque objects) takes much more
energy
.
Then
, wanting to slow down our use of earth resources, we are constructing materials that need a huge amount of
energy
to be made.
Hence
,
that is
a paradox, but no one
hasthe
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has the
choice, we need to go through
this
in order to save our planet. To conclude, solar
energy
is one of our main solutions even if it is not perfect.
This
seems to be the better in our range of propositions.
Then
, for companies order household
energy
,
this
is probably the best solution for our future.
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