Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In universities, the quantity of
men
and
women
in various
courses
is unbalance
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. Some people argue that
this
is unfair because both genders should have the same educational opportunities, and adjustment should be conducted to equalize the
number
of
men
and
women
.
However
, it seems to me that
this
idea is unrealistic and unjust. On the one hand, having the same
number
of
male
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males
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and
female
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females
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on most
of
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degree
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courses
is apparently impractical. As the matter of fact, the
number
of applications the institution receives decides the
number
of student members on the course. Many
courses
are more
favored
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by one
gender
than the other, so those
courses
would likely
to
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apply
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have significant dissimilarity in
number
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of
men
and
women
.
Furthermore
, the quantity of students always vacillates every
years
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and
thus
it makes the
propotions
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proportions
proportion
of genders unpredictable and unmanageable.
On the other hand
, I
also
believe that it would be unfair to base admission to university
courses
on
gender
.
Gender
, which does not relate to education, should not be a qualification to be considered
to begin
with. Academic standards,
otherwise
, should always remain
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the most crucial qualification to assess students’ suitability to
enroll
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in universities.
Therefore
, both
men
and
women
have the same opportunities and
self-determinations
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self-determination
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to settle their own choices. If a student
deserves
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, he or she should
be accept
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despite
gender
. To conclude, the selection of university students should be based on educational levels, and it would be unrealistic to alter the qualifications to
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gender-related
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gender-relate
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gender-related
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criteria.
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  • fostering innovation
  • educational experience
  • enforcing gender quotas
  • merit and potential
  • individual achievements
  • natural differences
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  • reducing gender stereotypes
  • balanced workforce
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