In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents choosing to self-educate their children at home rather then sending them to school. Do the advantages of home education outweigh the disadvantages?

Recently, in some countries, many couples choose to teach their

children

at

home

rather than sending them to school as usual.

This

trend has pros and cons and will be given in

this

essay. On the one hand,

home

education

has some advantages for

children

's development.

Firstly

, the

kids

can concentrate on practice than theory.

Children

will receive a suitable schedule for studying to get

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between learning the theories and applying them in real life.

Parent

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know which subjects are necessary for their

kids

and they let

kids

be free in learning what they like and trying the outdoor activities which relating to what

kids

learn.

Secondly

,

children

can avoid doing too much unnecessary homework in order to explore

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such

as art, computer, science, etc.

For example

,

parents

can guide their

kids

to learn more about

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computer

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when

parents

realize

kids

' interest in

this

major.

On the other hand

,

this

trend

also

brings some back draws. The

children

do not have friends

in

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the same age so that they may lose their motivation in their studies. Having competitors can help to create the inventions or stimulate the

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goals in each person.

For instance

, going to school can help

children

find their soulmates to develop together or establish a creative community of

the

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people

have

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the same vision.

In addition

,

parents

may lack

of

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qualified technical skills of teaching to educate their

kids

at

home

. They may not have

a

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standard

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instruction to guide

kids

from step to step. In the worst situation, some

parents

spend much time on one

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of

education

and ignore the others, like they want their

kids

to learn about science and do not let

kids

try

in

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the art subjects. In conclusion, the advantages of

home

education

do not outweigh the disadvantages. It is essential for

parents

to choose

the

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suitable methods

of

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for

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their

kids

in

education

.