You are not happy with the course you are doing at college and would like to change a different course. Write a letter to the college director requesting to change your course. You should include details about – what course you are doing now – why you are not satisfied with that course – what course would you like to change to.

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Dear Sir, I am writing to bring to your notice that

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month I had opted for a course on basic German as part of the institute’s mandatory requirement to learn a foreign language.

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, now I would like to drop that subject and

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opt for learning French.

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with, I had opted for German

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semester mainly due to the good reviews of the faculty teaching it.

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, because of my inclination to migrate to Germany, I was highly motivated to get started with learning basic German.

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, to my utter disappointment, the teacher allocated was someone else, and I am now finding it extremely difficult to follow him mainly due to his poor communication skills.

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, he had remained absent for the

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3 classes without giving us any notice which I felt was unprofessional on his part.

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, I would like to request you now to allow me to opt-out of

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subject, and

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let me choose French as my language course. Another reason for switching to learning French is because of the scholarship that I have now received to pursue my masters in Paris. I thank you for your consideration and await your prompt response. Do let me know the exact formalities that I have to complete in order to make

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switch. Yours faithfully, Abhinav

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

223 words

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

A city should try to preserve its old, historic buildings rather than replacing them with modern buildings. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that people should be allowed to work only till a set retirement age. Others say that if people want to work, age should not be a barrier to them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

89.The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

These days it is much easier for many people to travel to different countries for tourism than in the past. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Young people who commit serious crimes, such as a robbery or a violent attack should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?