You are not happy with the course you are doing at college and would like to change a different course. Write a letter to the college director requesting to change your course. You should include details about – what course you are doing now – why you are not satisfied with that course – what course would you like to change to.

Dear Sir, I am writing to bring to your notice that
last
month I had opted for a course on basic German as part of the institute’s mandatory requirement to learn a foreign language.
Nonetheless
, now I would like to drop that subject and
instead
opt for learning French.
To begin
with, I had opted for German
this
semester mainly due to the good reviews of the faculty teaching it.
Furthermore
, because of my inclination to migrate to Germany, I was highly motivated to get started with learning basic German.
However
, to my utter disappointment, the teacher allocated was someone else, and I am now finding it extremely difficult to follow him mainly due to his poor communication skills.
Moreover
, he had remained absent for the
first
3 classes without giving us any notice which I felt was unprofessional on his part.
Therefore
, I would like to request you now to allow me to opt-out of
this
subject, and
instead
let me choose French as my language course. Another reason for switching to learning French is because of the scholarship that I have now received to pursue my masters in Paris. I thank you for your consideration and await your prompt response. Do let me know the exact formalities that I have to complete in order to make
this
switch. Yours faithfully, Abhinav
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