Modern technology is now very common in most workplaces. how do you think this had changed the way we work? Do you think there are disadvantages to relying too much on technology?

Updated systems are now acceptable in the workstation most and it is increasing day by day. It can provide a variation in our daily lives and

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it can create creativity which

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our working system

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. From, my perspective, there are too

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advantages which

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the disadvantages if we depend on technical aspects. One of the positives of

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technology

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is to increase our knowledge. Not only

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enhancing the idea but

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it saves the

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times where it can create a vital impact in the social matter. Nowadays life is very complex. We have to accomplish a

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of tasks in a very short

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. To lessen and minimize our task load there is no alternative way of

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, managing everything is the key factor

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of tasks that

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to be managed in a very short

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, there

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types of uncertain issues where it requires the function of

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, aforetime, folks were busy

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to do their work and

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are now advanced where they are using technical terms frequently. Despite positive things, there are a

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of side effects of technological terms. It is because they have

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flexibility and easy access to use.

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are attracted

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evil deeds where

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creates more.

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, modern systems deceive

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. It is told that men like idleness.

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attract

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people

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to do

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without any

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, creating a

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of shortcut issues provide human huge troubles.

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are now working while they are lying on the bed. It impacts badly on their physical issues where there create a

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of obesity. In conclusion, there is no alternative

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using

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though it fashions

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lazy. In my opinion, proper

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of

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has a

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of merits which surpasses the demerits.