many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes the many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?
Some
people
argue that we have to find a solution to decrease consumption
of sugar in Correct article usage
the consumption
foods
and that's increasing the price
of sugary products
, which almost all foods
and drinks contain high
amount of that. I completely disagree with Add an article
a high
this
statement that this
solution gonna be effective enough.
There would be at least two facet
to Change to a plural noun
facets
this
proposal. Firstly
, If a food producing
company decide to increase the Add a hyphen
food-producing
price
of it's
sugary Replace the word
its
products
, other rival companies may implement the same policy so price
of all sugary Add an article
the price
products
will increase simultaneously. Secondly
, it is unavoidable that people
still believe high-quality foods
and drinks surely have more price
in compared with low-quality products
. Furthermore
, consumption
of this
sugary Correct determiner usage
these
foods
couldn't decrease and it also
can mislead people
for
buying these Change preposition
into
products
. Finally
, these sugary products
are still so detrimental for
body health and nothing will change by increasing their prices.
There is ample evidence that how different Nations can manage Change preposition
to
production
and Correct article usage
the production
consumption
of these detrimental products
. By educating people
about her their lifestyle and substance
that they consume. Correct article usage
the substance
For instance
, show commercial advertising about sugary products
drawbacks. Also
government can allocate some special benefits to factories Add a comma
,Also
which
can produce Correct pronoun usage
that
foods
with fewer amounts of sugar. Numerous studies have constantly found that food raw materials like artificial glucose that is
harmful for
health can be replaced with other natural sugary elements.
In conclusion, I would argue that Change the preposition
to
consumption
of sugary products
should be restricted but not from increasing the price
of product
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the product
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