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In many countries, paying for the things using mobile phone (cellphone) apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages?

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One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is using of a
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smart
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phone
. It is undeniable that a mobile
phone
 has become an essential part of our life.
As a result
, there is a great number of citizens in many countries buy items by its. It is obvious that there are pros and cons
of
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this
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this
 essay, both views will be scrutinized.
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Everybody
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Every body
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 knows that a cellphone is an extremely useful device for modern individuals. Many people do
purchasing
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 by phones in supermarkets as well as online. The main advantage is that people can order any items on the
Internet
 without cash, not looking at location or time. A good example here is the
Internet
 shops
such
 as Amazon or Ali Express when we buy something and get
package
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 in one or two days, using
phone
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. A lot of citizens in many countries do it every day around the world. Another side of
this
 coin is
Internet
frauds
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, the main reason is that to pilfer all money from a bank account is easier by a mobile
phone
. If you visit some unknown
web sites
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 and apply your data about your credit or debit cards rogues may withdraw your money. We should be more careful using a cellphone buying on the
Internet
. Taking
for example
 Russia or Ukraine. It is a common situation for these countries when
phone
’s swindlers try to cheat people. In conclusion, taking everything mentioned into account in our final analysis we can say that advantages overweight disadvantages if we will be wiser and will buy online using only popular
web sites
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • safety
  • security
  • time-saving
  • cashless transactions
  • dependence on technology
  • privacy concerns
  • accessibility issues
  • financial vulnerability
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