It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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states that some
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are born with inborn
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and some are not. whereas, many
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say that everyone can perform better if they have the right guidance and training.
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is not enough if they don'
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have proper strategy and effort. some
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believe that Children can learn every sport with constant training.
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is because concentrating on a sport for a long period of time can boost their ability to get better results. They
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feel that learning proper skills can give them an edge to get compete with tough opponents.
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, a famous cricket player in an interview said that he didn'
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know how to use the bat at his earlier age of practice, but because of his interest
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and with good training and constant attempts he aced the
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. Now he is on the list of the top ten cricketers of all time.
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, others feel that some
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got inborn
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from their childhood. They
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believe that
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kind of
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doesn'
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need any personal taring or hard workouts to show their domination in any
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, unlike others who work hard but never achieves anything. They are confident that if they compete with any opponent they will Win with ease.
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, a news report says that in football, how hard did Naymer. jr plays it doesn'
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matter, because they feel that Messi has that natural ability to turn the
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at any point.
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, it is shown that hard work can'
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stand beside born
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. In conclusion, In my opinion, both hard work and
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are very essential, because without practice they cannot stand strong in front of their opponents it doesn'
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matter how talented they are if they don'
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have a plan to win the
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there is much chance of losing it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Innate talent
  • Nurture
  • Prodigy
  • Proficiency
  • Deliberate practice
  • Physiological factors
  • Grit
  • Perseverance
  • Cultural norms
  • Structured training
  • Physical predisposition
  • Natural aptitude
  • Dedicated training
  • Societal influence
  • Passion
  • Genetic endowment
  • Skill acquisition
  • Expertise
  • Extracurricular activities
  • Mastery
  • Cognitive abilities
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