Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Students from Primary schools to universities learn more
on
theoretical aspects rather than Change preposition
about
getting
practical learning Verb problem
apply
on
their education. I completely agree with Change preposition
in
this
view as practical learning will motivate pupils to study. Hence
, greater opportunities they will get in terms of career
. First of all, educating practical aspects will make the students focus more on their studies Fix the agreement mistake
careers
Pupil
who encaged theory will eventually forget what they were taught Fix the agreement mistake
Pupils
few
months before or in other words they will not show interest in subjects, in resulting poor performance in their final grades. Correct article usage
a few
For instance
, Primary school children are taught how to solve a sum by some interesting game format, which leads them to involve
more and clearly understand the theory behind Wrong verb form
involved
this
. The more practical experience undergraduates gain, the more involvement
Replace the word
involved
there
will be. Correct pronoun usage
they
On the other hand
, students who gained
more practical knowledge will tackle the adverse situation effortlessly compared to the academic person. When hiring managers Wrong verb form
gain
recruiting
employees for a particular job, they most probably consider how practically the candidates are sound enough on the tastes. Wrong verb form
recruit
For example
, the interviewer may know how to solve a mathematical model however
, he/she doesn't know to
apply it to Rephrase
how to
the
real-world problem. The greater Correct article usage
a
practical
ability graduates have, the greater rewards they will gain in the future. In conclusion, I strongly believe that it is imperative for the scholars who are going to live in modern society, should be generated more practical knowledge than theoretical facts. It would allow them to survive in the future with better employment and inter qualities.Correct article usage
the practical
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
