some people think living in big cities is bad for people's health. to what extent do you agree or disagree

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global

population has been rising, millions of

people

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any

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part

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of countries decide to live in the major city has increased significantly. Most of these are

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of health

problem

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tolally

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totally

agree with

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statemaent

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statement

because

of

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the main city has a ton of junk

food

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and contain

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air pollution. The

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reason why

people

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who live in huge cities become less healthy as nowadays, a number of

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food

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restaurant has

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on every corner of the building in downtown, so

people

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can get

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easy for their meal in rush hours without

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of

food

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nutrition.

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, It is could lead them to malnutrition disease.

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, Thai's

populations

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numbers were growing of obesity in decades past as junk

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.

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, Thailand health

organization

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have to tackle the problem by

encourage

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their population to consume quality

food

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such

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as organic products Another reason

of

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crowds in

main

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town

are

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not

environment

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environmentally

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friendly

because

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is because

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of traffic congestion, causing widespread impact for

community

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the community

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.

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mumber

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number

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of Carbon dioxide emission from

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large

amount of vehicle, making Bangkok face of air pollution for many years. According, It is causing widespread impact

for

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community respiratory system problem. To sum up,

people

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should deliberate carefully before moving to huge cities because It has brought about too many problems for

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a positive trend.