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4. In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.

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It is quite obvious to recognize that many developed
countries
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 are experiencing remarkable increases in
life
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expectancy
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.
This
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 essay will discuss some possible problems
this
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 trend can bring and propose several solutions to handle those . One of the major challenges of the growth of elderly
people
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 is that it seriously puts a heavy burden on the economy and
government
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 expenditure due to the greater funding demands of retired
people
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 .
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 , older
people
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 are more unable to earn
money
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 and make ends meet by themselves ,
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 , the more
people
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 claim pension benefits , the more the
government
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 struggles to meet an
ever rising
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 number of retired workers and pension commitments . Another problem of growing
life
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expectancy
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 is that it leads to
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 shortage of labour as well as wage inflation in the working environment . Because of the shrinking working population , many companies have to push up the salary to attract more employees to work for their organization . As a consequence , wage inflation is much more prevalent among these developed
countries
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 . The
government
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 could certainly make more effort to mitigate these negative effects of increasing
life
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expectancy
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 . The
first
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 solution would be to educate
people
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 about the importance of
money
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 management and saving for retirement . By adhering to a strict budget, older
people
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 will have a certain amount of
money
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 to pay their bills and take care of themselves without support from their children or the
government
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 , which could reduce the burden on the economy of their
countries
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 .
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 , the
government
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 can provide great opportunities
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 as scholarships or accommodations for abroad students to come , study , and
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 work in their
countries
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 . By encouraging the immigration of young
people
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 , not only lack of labour but
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 wage inflation can be remarkably alleviated . In conclusion , it is evident that there are several problems of increasing
life
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expectancy
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 , including greater funding demands as well as
shortage
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a shortage
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 of young workers , and a variety of solutions, especially raising public awareness of
money
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 management and encouraging young migrants of working age .
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average life expectancy
  • developed world
  • increase
  • individuals
  • society
  • personal goals
  • ambitions
  • quality of life
  • leisure
  • recreation
  • healthcare costs
  • challenges
  • healthcare system
  • ageing population
  • shortage
  • available workers
  • economy
  • retirement planning
  • healthy lifestyles
  • investing
  • social support systems
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