Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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of low-income

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are better equipped in terms of facing

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challenges in adulthood compared to

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of high-income

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.

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some advocate that

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with poor

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be more

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resilient

to cope with problems,

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has to offer, I disagree with

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notion because of two main reasons: delinquency and disenchantment. To commence with, the

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play a huge role as role models. They establish some convections and codes of conduct for their

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which

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their

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can follow later on, hopefully leading to a

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of truancy and delinquency.

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,

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with low-income may not always be there to establish these ground rules as they would be more occupied with their work in return for wages.

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combination of

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of parenting and poor

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would increase their likelihood

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embarking on a

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of delinquency or worse.

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, in the movie "Dangerous mind" it was apparent that it was frequent

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with poor

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who tended to play truant and

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delinquent

. In stark contrast,

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of wealthy

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are somewhat insulated from these problems, as their

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do not have to fend for their

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in

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way. Admittedly, not all

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of poor

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would be prone to a

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of crimes. Some may learn from their

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, appreciate hard work and develop responsibilities towards their fellow citizens and contribute equally in the community along with their

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.

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, it would not be without feelings of being trapped in an evil cycle of disenchantment because of their consistent circumstances. In conclusion,

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cordially believe that there is a strong association between a child

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and coping mechanisms in adulthood.

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, I disagree that

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of poor

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are better prepared to handle problems in their adulthood.