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IT’S GENERALLY BELIEVED THAT SUCCESS IN FIELDS SUCH AS ART AND SPORT CAN ONLY BE ACHIEVED IF A PERSON HAS NATURAL TALENT. HOWEVER, IT’S SOMETIMES CLAIMED THAT ANY CHILD CAN BE TAUGHT TO BECOME A GOOD SPORTS PERSON OR ARTIST. DISCUSS BOTH THESE VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.

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Every person has a different skill set some of them are acquired by birth and some are instilled by themselves. People believe that
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 from their family while some claims opposite that
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 expertise can be learnt to become successful in these particular areas.
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 and provide him/her a successful future. Many people believe that natural talent is necessary for an artist and a sports person to get a name and fame in these fields. As they don't have to invest time into these
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 which have gained from their generations. Daughter of all-time famous Bollywood actor Shakti Kapoor can be used as an example, she never attended modelling or acting school to instil the art of acting into herself,
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 talent she has gained in inheritance.
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, children who are born with
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 natural expertise do not have to struggle in their careers to become popular.
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, children who are not born talented but are highly determined towards sport and other artistic areas have others ways to incorporate these
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 into their lives
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 as; by joining sports classes, clubs or craft schools. In
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 way, they can compete with others without any hesitance and will prove themselves on the international and national levels.
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, Football play "Cristiano Ronaldo" has no family history of football players, but he excelled in
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 field by his own hard work and determination.
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 it proves that talents can
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 be taught or learnt on self-realization when
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 feels an attachment to that specific profession. I personally prefer learning these talents on their own will are more precious and has the tendency to turn
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's
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 poor to rich or infamous to famous.
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, we should always keep our heads high and try to learn more
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, with constant practice anything is possible in
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. In conclusion, after considering both views it can be said that
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 long learnings do make a difference in standing
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 out of the crowd, while family acquired
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