Some people think that paying taxes is enough to contribute to society. Others argue that being a citizen involves more responsibilities. Discuss what is your opinion?

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between
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that paying
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is sufficient for a social contribution, while few think that
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should participate in other works as well. I believe, paying
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on time is important for the economic growth of the nation but along with that
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must have to obey
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, keep
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clean and make a
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society. In
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will support my opinion with examples. On the one hand, it is undeniable that
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paying regular
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helps
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the government
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to maintain the infrastructure, medicare and public-school system of the country.
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, in Canada
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do not hide their income; it is essential for them to pay property
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, food
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and service
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. Legal
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use these
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to provide complimentary education, free of charge medical care and so on additional facilities.
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,
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who are unable to serve the region by community services
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as police, teacher and doctor, they believe that paying
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amount of
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is equal to these duties.
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,
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cannot run the society without the contribution of the residents. If
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imitate all the
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and laws, it will support
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to keep the nation safe and strong.
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government enforce laws during
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pendemic
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pandemic
. Australian
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follow those
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strictly and
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, Australia has
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number of COVID cases, and
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live there without and
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fear. In conclusion,
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have different viewpoints regarding helping society.
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, many think that paying
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is one and only
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for them, obeying the
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, making no crime and keeping
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the environment
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clean is the other duties that we have to do. Personally, in my opinion, if
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should pay
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as well as doing other chores, makes the community beautiful.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fundamental
  • development
  • public services
  • social contract
  • financially support
  • civic responsibility
  • communal activities
  • engaged in the political process
  • advocating
  • enriches
  • actively participate
  • political process
  • less fortunate
  • environmentally responsible
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