It is commonly said that the increased business between countries has a great impact on the the culture and the country’s identity in itself. Do you agree of disagree?

In

this

era of globalisation, the world is considered to be a global village as trade, tourism, films, politics, music, literature and arts are not confined within a nation's border. The increased exchange between countries has a great impact on the culture and the country's identity in itself. In my opinion, I completely agree that

this

phenomenon has brought a plethora of benefits for the

states

. In the essay, I will discuss the positive impacts brought by

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international business between

states

.

Firstly

, there is no doubt that

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foreign exchange has brought an ample amount of benefits for the

states

. Increased foreign trades mean greater profitability for the country.

Consequently

, it enhances the international reputation of the nation which results in a boost of the global economies. It provides an opportunity to the underdeveloped

states

to learn about the cultures and lifestyles of the more developed ones and

thus

improve their condition. It

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strengthens the alliance between

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countries.

For instance

, the USA and Israel are known to be the best allies and

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great cultural and trade communication, benefiting both territories.

Secondly

, the positive outcomes of cross-cultural activities and international business are immense. With the advancement of technology and

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people have access to movies,

musics

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, arts, languages or cultures of other territories. The foreign exchange opportunities have helped people to purchase and sell products at a competitive price and they have far more options than

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past. Crops grown in a distant village or dresses designed by

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rural labour have got a world market and

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has helped to combat the vicious problem of poverty. To conclude, the positive outcomes through foreign exchanges and cross-cultural activities are tremendous. As mentioned earlier in the essay, I hold the view that the phenomenon is extremely beneficial for a province's citizens and heritages and

also

results in having a great impact on its national identity.