Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes.
It seems that requirement may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.
The plural verb are does not appear to agree with the singular subject every matter. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.
The noun phrase society seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
It appears that decision making is missing a hyphen. Consider adding the hyphen(s).
There should be no comma after the article a in your sentence. Remove the comma.
The noun phrase parent seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The noun phrase better way seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.
Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.
When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.
Linking words for giving examples:
- for example
- for instance
- to illustrate this
- to give a clear example
- such as
- to illustrate
- take, for example