Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes.

Nowadays, the modern society many children like getting own

decisions

around their basic

requirement

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,

likewise

, food, clothes and the

way

of entertainment. Some people were arguing, allowing them to make their own selection on every matter that

are

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influenced by

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society in a harmful

way

like individualism. Other people were arguing, it is an impotent

way

let

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them make their

decisions

about themselves regarding that matter.

This

essay will explore both opinions and express my view in the end.

To begin

with , many parents are nowadays, force on their child live much more compare in earlier. They think children could not make self

decisions

without a proper guide, while even their meals, dresses or

the

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hobbies

also

choose by their parents. It will badly affect their babies in future circumstances.

Hence

, they cannot live without their elders, cannot make self-opinion without depending on others advice.

On the other hand

, some believe that let them make their own choices on every matter in their life. But as a parent, you have to protect your own child in bad situations.

Moreover

, children have the right to make their own opinion even, favourite food, to watch most like movie or cartoon, play a more preferable video game, etc...

As a result

, it helps them build independently, enhance their creativeness,

decision making

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ability leadership qualities and self-motivation.

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, as a

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parent

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you should guide your younger’s in the proper

way

.

However

, they are too young to get their own

decisions

in every circumstance, while adults needed to help them to select and find out positive and negative things in their lives. It will help them to grow in good qualities and attitudes and the modern society.

Although

, In my view, is we have to guide teenagers in

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better

way

and let them make their self-decision as well. I moderately agree with

this

second

option.