Any
society
is alive based on various aspects that government should provide. One of the most important of them is economics.
Although
economic improvement is crucial in every
country
,
this
would be not enough and other possible growth factors of a
country
should be considered
such
as
politics
and
security
that will be discussed
.
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is one of the essential elements of every
society
, and by putting enough attention and nurturing it, several benefits will be provided; Two of the most important ones are crowd lives enhancements and increasing
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country
power
. If any
country
wants to obtain its people
power
for buying goods, the government itself needs to sustain the
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health.
Then
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can provide a relaxing life for their families by
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amount of salary they gain. The other benefit that
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growth will provide, is improving
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country
power
among others.Every
society
with
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economy
will gain tourists and powerful companies attention and
subsequently
will be more powerful than it was before.
For example
, China is now of
the greatest world leaders in
economy
, and
It is a great
country
.
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there are other factors as good as or even more important than
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,
such
as
politics
and
security
power
of a
country
. No
country
can be successful without having
with others and
that is
why good political contacts are very important.
For instance
, there is North Korea as an independent
country
, and It barely has
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with other governments, and It is clear, living quality is not suitable for their people in that
country
.
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politics
,
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power
of a
country
is the other
factor that needs to be provided.
should assure their
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so that they can spend their time without
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.As we have heard in news, we are aware that Afghan people are not having a secure life these days because of their lack of
security
in their
country
.
To conclude, as discussed in advance,
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is one of the essential things for
society
but
on the other hand
, there is
security
and
politics
which have
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of inhabitants and
therefore
governments should
also
consider these as well.