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f the British that are divided into three genres agree

#f #british #three #genres
The bar chart illustrates how many of the British that
are
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 divided into three genres (woman,
children
 and men) consume more than five groups of vegetables and fish once a day between 2011 and 2017. Overall, it is clear that all groups experienced an upward trend throughout the period. Both the women and men had
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significant growth, while the
children
 had some fluctuations until the end of the period. In 2011, the percentage of women eating fish and vegetables was at 20%.
Then
, it remained constant in the
next
 two years. The chart had a rapid rise to over 35% in 2016 and decreased to 30%
last
 year. Meanwhile, the proportion of men was at around 17% in 2011 and had a steady increase to about 24% in the year 2015.
However
, it slightly fell by approximately 1% before it became the highest percentage in 2017. In terms of
children
, at the beginning of the period, it showed the lowest point at 10%. After
this
, it had a slight increase to approximately 14% and it continued with fluctuations
in
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 2013 to 2017.
Finally
, the proportion of
children
 was at 30% in 2017.
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