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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If this are not taught, many are at risk of dying out.

#english #school #languages #risk
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Some people express their ideas about learning
English
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 as an international
language
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 highly recognise than learning the native
language
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. Same as other people who think educating a foreign
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 would local
language
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 at risk. I am going to express my personal thoughts with some examples.
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 of all,
English
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 has become a global
language
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 at the moment in every way. As a basic example, a user who is unable to use new technology, if the person does not have
English
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 proficiency. When we discuss the working environment in an office, co-workers will speak in their native
language
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.
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, when it comes to documentation and communication,
such
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 as answering the phone, Emails and presentations would use in the
English
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 medium.
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 to that, most of the universities held their lectures in
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 medium, which will be easy for students to collect extra educational materials from international universities.
On the other hand
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, some parts of the community believed that studying
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 at schools will lead to the dead-end of the native
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. Those kinds of beliefs would depend on personal experience and troughs. When someone has a poor experience with the
English
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language
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, that person will make up their mind in a negative way. Most of the older generation identify learning
English
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 at school will lead the country of the colony of
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 speaking country. In my point of view, I would agree to teach the
second
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language
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 as
English
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 would be more beneficial to the student and same as the local and global job market. The
English
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 as a global
language
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 who studied in the school would have more advantages in various sectors.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global communication
  • economic opportunities
  • cultural diversity
  • endangered
  • linguistic heritage
  • inclusive
  • multilingualism
  • language revitalization
  • language policy
  • language preservation
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