Each year, the crime rate increases. What do you think are the causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?

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rate in our societies and give some

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to prevent

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problem.

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with, there are many reasons behind the sharp increase in the

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percentage all over the world.

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why the rate of

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increased, drugs spread among students in many high schools, and they became

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of what they do.

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in America because of drugs from high school students.

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, ignorance could be the reason

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violence. It leads to illegal activities, some families could not efforts education for their children.

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poverty leads

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to commit

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a crime

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crime

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.

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many ways.

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who cannot get

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could be limited ignorance in many societies.

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and give them insurance

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crime

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like thefts.

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rehabilitation

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program for those who

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addiction

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and give them medical plan even after they left the rehab, they should check them

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. In conclusion, there are many different methods to decreased

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cases in the whole world and make our societies

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providing jobs to poor families, allowing free education for children and rehabilitation

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for

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