Each year, the crime rate increases. What do you think are the causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?
Each year criminal cases increases in the whole world and
this
problem might damage our life. The
following paragraphs I will discuss the causes of Change preposition
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increase
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the increase
the
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in the
crime
rate in our societies and give some solution
to prevent Fix the agreement mistake
solutions
this
problem.
To begin
with, there are many reasons behind the sharp increase in the crime
percentage all over the world. Firstly
, addiction could be the most reasons
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reason
of
why the rate of Change preposition
apply
crime
are
increased, drugs spread among students in many high schools, and they became Change the verb form
is
unawareness
of what they do. Replace the word
unaware
For example
, the renowned public magazine published that many cases of crime
in America because of drugs from high school students. Secondly
, ignorance could be the reason of
violence. It leads to illegal activities, some families could not efforts education for their children.
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Finally
, also
poverty leads people
to commit Add an article
a crime
crime
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crimes
such
as thefts
.
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theft
On the other hand
, this
problem could be solved by
many ways. Change preposition
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For instance
, allowing free education for people
who cannot get efforts
could be limited ignorance in many societies. Fix the agreement mistake
effort
Also
, providing jobs for poor people
and give them insurance this
can be prevent
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prevent
crime
like thefts. Moreover
, rehabilitation
program for those who Add an article
a rehabilitation
has
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have
addiction
and give them medical plan even after they left the rehab, they should check them Add an article
an addiction
regular
.
In conclusion, there are many different methods to decreased Change the adjective
regularly
crime
cases in the whole world and make our societies safety
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such
as,
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program
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programs
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addicted
people
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