Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
It has been observed that more effective than labour
,
Artificially intelligent Remove the comma
apply
robots
would be one of the types of employers in the future.In my opinion,Although
robots
could do some of the jobs, to get better outcomes,human employees are more effective than robots
.In this
essay I will discuss , ,
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eventually
all the careers cannot be replaced with Add a comma
,eventually
robots
some are exist
in future as more human Change the verb form
exist
works
.
The machine cannot do most of the labour works
,Such
works
should be done only by the human workforce.It would be a costly investment that,Using robots
for most of the medium and lower segment companies.In Srilanka for a construction site,It might not possible to use a machine for all the works
,since without investing much they can easily find enough skilled labourers by an even simple paper advertisement.Likewise
there are some Add a comma
,Likewise
works
that can still continue with humans without bearing additional
cost.
The machine could replace Add an article
the additional
works
like all the day events,Which humans cannot continue without taking breaks in between working hours.This
kind of works
Add a missing verb
is
works
.In most of the banks , they are using machines for cash deposits and cash withdrawals as all the day events with the rather than taking intervals.Such
works
are more effective,Moving forward with the artificially intelligent robots
.
Artificial intelligent robots
are likely using for most of the works
,which are highly result-oriented fields.Skill workers cannot replace by robotic machines ,In spite of replacement for ,unskill jobs generate better results with robotic machines.To conclude,there are
advance or Change the verb form
is
in
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apply
advance
jobs that will exist with Replace the word
advanced
the
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robots
in the future .Submitted by nalindaliyanage on
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- secondly
- thirdly
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- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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