Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, public transport has been key for travelling to distant places, there are myriad ways of transportations
such
as
railways
, airways, seaways and roads. If an individual is willing to
travel
to far places
trains
and aeroplanes are
only
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ways to reach his/her destination.
Majority
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of
people
agree that
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that governments
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those governments
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needed to put much income on the
railways
upon the roads.
First
of all, as travelling to long distances only include
railways
and aeroplanes the ticket fare for aeroplanes is higher
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than
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that
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than
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most
of
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the
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people
cannot afford. So,
government
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the government
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need
consider
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to consider
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this
issue and try to increase the number of
trains
and tracks for the
trains
, the process becomes much effortless for many
people
.
For instance
, In
India
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if a person wanted to
travel
to
place
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a place
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through train the respective person needs to book the ticket
atleast
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at least
two months in advance
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so that his/her berth can be confirmed.
Secondly
, as everyone knows that cars are
bit
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costly, and
on the other hand
, petrol and diesel prices have reached the sky, myriad
people
do not prefer cars and other personal vehicles to
travel
to farther places. Whereas,
trains
are considered to be
cheapest
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the cheapest
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way of transport with luxury and comforts included.
Furthermore
,
government
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the government
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need
focus
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to focus
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on new technologies to improve
railway
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the railway
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system.
For example
, many countries
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introduced bullet
trains
which can
travel
with
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a speed of 500
kilometers
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kilometres
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per hour and makes
journey
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the journey
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fast and comfortable. In conclusion, governments are needed to focus keenly on
development
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the development
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of modern technologies to make
people
journey effortless and comfortable, investing much capital on
railways
rather than roads can make travelling with significantly less duration.
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