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International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment.

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the legal of each
country
 has different rules that include with the international travelling legal too, that will make both advantages and disadvantages for those
countries
. So the impact of
tourism
 may be determined by either the legal of that
country
 they go to or the behaviour that they do.
Tourism
 makes many benefits to the
country
 they go to, but if they have advantages, it may be had disadvantages.
For instance
, some travellers have a purpose to make a good experience with cultures or wherever they go, but for some tourists, the purpose of those are not to be travelled to find new experiences but may have to be a connection to sell or import the illegal drugs to those
countries
 that will cause troubles in that
countries
. So the illegal tourist maybe uses
this
 way to causes the worst to the environment by making the native people addicted to the drugs that they import into that
country
 and
also
 the way to pandemic SAR-COV2(COVID-19)
on the other hand
, the tourists, that come to announce the religion or cultures of their
countries
, will make many benefits and connections between their
countries
, and
then
 it will improve the economy of those counties which lead to domestic money circulation and make the native people have a better life. in the conclusion of my opinion, regardless of either international
tourism
 or tourist, have different impacts in the ways that they come. So International
tourism
 has a similar number of pros and cons, But what determines whether it is advantages or disadvantages is determined by the purpose of the tourists for what they do.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enormous benefit
  • impact
  • local inhabitants
  • environment
  • disadvantages
  • outweigh
  • advantages
  • economic benefits
  • job creation
  • cultural exchange
  • infrastructure development
  • promotion
  • local products
  • environmental impact
  • exploitation
  • resources
  • cultural erosion
  • increased cost of living
  • overcrowding
  • congestion
  • balancing
  • benefits
  • disadvantages
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