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Some people suggest that children do not understand the world of work and schools should make teenagers spend a short time working as well as studying academic subjects. to what extent do you agree

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Most educational systems around the world focus on theoretical aspects rather than exposing school children to a workplaces environment.
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 of
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, adolescents do not have a good understanding of
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. In my view, teenagers should spend some time in workstations while studying for two reasons: to be exposed to practical assignments and the importance of teamwork.
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 with, a
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 environment enables learners to understand how the theories they study in class are applied practically. Students who study subjects
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 as engineering and chemistry will be able to understand how machines or instruments in laboratories are being operated. In most cases, they should be taken,
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, to industries or construction sites to be exposed to
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 conditions.
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 to practicals, when teenagers are in
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 areas, they will be in a pole position to acquire soft skills that are not taught in classrooms. These include appreciating the need for working as a team and respecting divergent views or opinions.
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, they will
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 replicate the same in their schools and, at the same time, put more effort into their studies. Eventually, children,
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, will be ready to, seamlessly, transition to
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 once they graduate. The reason,
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, I do not disagree with the statement is because if adolescents are not subjected to a job environment at early stages, they will not be competent and lack the necessary skills to survive and be competitive in the job market once the time comes. In Kenya,
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, many employers are ever complaining about incompetent professionals who have joined the market. So, educational institutions should
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 play a role in ensuring the children have a good understanding of
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 as they study. In summary, theory and practical aspects go hand-in-hand,
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 there should be a balance between the two.
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