The only way to improve the safety of our roads is to give much stricter punishments on driving offenses. What extent do you agree or disagree?
The word Everyday may be used incorrectly. Review the following notes to determine the appropriate usage for your context.
The plural verb have does not appear to agree with the singular subject plethora. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.
The verb have does not seem to agree with the subject. Consider changing the verb form.
It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase At first. Consider adding a comma.
It appears that you have an unnecessary comma in a compound predicate. Consider removing it.
The noun phrase crossing seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
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Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.
Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.
When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.
Linking words for giving examples:
- for example
- for instance
- to illustrate this
- to give a clear example
- such as
- to illustrate
- take, for example