Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?

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is harmful to the environment. In
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I will discuss how the
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will give some real-life examples of environmental problem solutions and
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the prime role of
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. Humans are extremely harmful to
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wild animals are no longer live in the
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catch dangerous and friendly animals for food. At
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moment, everywhere in the world focus on the economy rather than
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and farmland. So we can say, most of the time businessman or big company holders are a key factor for destroying the environment.
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some wood furniture company
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cut down a tree from the
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.Another reason for damaging the environment is to kill
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. So that climate change rapidly. In terms of these problem solutions
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, the government can give advertisements on television or newspaper,
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they can add some topic about
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at primary school level. it will be beneficial for the
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generation.
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, they should give punishment for build industry or big housing
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the
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area.
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can be a great prospective for solve
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problem. like they can plant trees beside their home or make rooftop gardens in
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urban areas. ,
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they can discourage other
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to buy plastic because it's extremely harmful to
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especially for the soil.
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, common
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a campaign
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on social media to save forset, animals and
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could be motivated for doing something In conclusion. there are lots of ways to dismiss
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through
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Pollution: contamination, emissions, pollutants, industrial waste
  • Deforestation: habitat loss, biodiversity, urban development, logging
  • Climate Change: greenhouse gases, global warming, fossil fuels, renewable energy
  • Overfishing: unsustainable, fish stocks, marine ecosystems, conservation
  • Waste Production: non-biodegradable, plastics, recycling, waste management systems
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