In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.

Many Countries health care managers required the government to raise the tax on junk

foods

in order to control the public’s unhealthy eating habits.

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method would not be affordable due to some problems.

Firstly

, homeless people would starve more than

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and

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,

this

would not affect one who daily consumes

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outside

. growing the tariff up of fast prepared

foods

have side effects on

homeless

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and persons who have lower income. In most

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the

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countries, raw materials are highly valued which poor people prefers to consume junk and pre-cooked

foods

rather than buy

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organic ones and cook them at home since that will cost

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price.

Therefore

, health issues would be purposeless toward their habitat of eating. Based on a survey in 2020 in Italy’s

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stores, 40% of the

costumers

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customers

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were homeless ones

whom

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eat at least a meal per

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day. As can be imagined, many will stay hungry and that may

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social disorders and indigestion. In crowded and big cities everyone has

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schedule

also

they stay outside of their home for more than eight hours a day

thus

, they do not have enough time to cook

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at home and stay in

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for a long time. Increasing taxes would not have any

impacts

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on employees since they will pay for their feeding consumption no matter how expensive it could be. In Tokyo, 90% of people eat in restaurants since time is priceless for them and it is highly

essentially

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to spend it wisely. To sum it up, levy

tariff

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a tariff

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of

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junk food and set

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for them won't be positively effective. In conclusion,

consuming

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system of a society is really important to feed each person of it equally without sharply

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increase

the fee. It is mandatory, Both groups of

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incomers and workers feed themselves by pre-cooked meals anytime they want. I strongly disagree to pay higher taxes for fast

foods

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food

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.