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Write about the following topic: The environmental problems that today's world is facing are so great. So government and large organizations should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. The what extent so you agreed or disagree?

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By
this
 reference letter, I write my formal recommendation of
Bárbara
 Quintino Farias Monteiro. I was a member of the board of examiners for
Bárbara
’s final thesis for her bachelor’s degree in Industrial Engineering at the University of Fortaleza, in which she carried out a case study of process optimization at a wind blade manufacturer. During her studies,
Bárbara
 assured
to
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 apply her theoretical knowledge into practice and to use the
proper
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 learned methodologies to her case study.
Bárbara
 reinforced the value to follow the studied methods and made important associations between theory and practice.
Bárbara
also
 prioritized the use of data and number to support her diagnoses, insight and recommendations. During
this
 process,
Bárbara
 was characterized by her commitment and high-quality deliveries.
For example
, she was always concerned to respect the deadlines and follow the given standard. The meetings and previous sections until the final submission day, was well-taken care of by her with organization and dedication.
As a result
, she achieved a great score in her thesis, a 9 score out of 10 in total. She proved excellent communication, writing, speaking, and presentation skills. She guided the audience through her presentation, which was very didactic and visual. She brought facts, gave good examples, showing pictures and graphs. I believe she would be an excellent mentor one day if she wishes to follow that path. During the showcase we could empathize with
Bárbara
’s passion for the wind industry,
consequently
, she seemed comfortable speaking about the subject and answer the questions made by the board. It was great to see her enthusiasm combined with discipline guiding her into a successful case study and academic journey. Considering the above, I highly recommend
Bárbara
 to the master´s degree program and scholarship. I believe that she will be a strong asset that will bolster the community of your university. If you wish more information regarding
Bárbara
’s academic background and my experience with her, please feel free to contact me via phone or e-mail. My contact details are listed below:
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