Smoking should be banned in public places because it not only harms the smokers, but also those who are nearby. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Today smoking activities are prohibited in public areas in order to prevent non-
smokers
from smoke
exposure. I definitely agree with this
statement because it will lead to a number of health
issues for both smokers
and second
-hand smokers
.
The first
reason why I agree with the prohibition of smoking in public places is that smoking is not good for smokers
’ well-being. they might get unhealthy on their body cavity, such
as liver, heart
, lungs, etc. Your body will be broken and diseases will come up and harm you; for example
, my father is a smoker
and after smoking for 20 years he got sick on his lungs and he often could not breathe normally today, after he checked to
a doctor, a doctor said that there is some bad effect of his smoking habit. and if he wants to get healthier, he must get Change preposition
with
heart
surgery to put three rings on his heart
vessels.
Aside from leading to health
issues for smokers
, smoke
exposure will trigger a number of health
problems for passive smokers
. Passive smokers
always breathe smoke
without smoking, some research said that passive smokers
could get bigger damage than smokers
that happened because smoke
is a trigger for passive smokers
to get bad risks, such
as lungs cancer, heart
coroner, heart
disease, stroke, and others; for example
, my friend on a college is a passive smoker
who often hangs out with his smoker
friends. After 3 years always becomes a passive smoker
for a period and often, he can’t breathe normally like before. According to that issue, he had a verdict to has lung cancer and must get surgery immediately.
To conclude, I personally agree with the statement saying that smokers
should be prohibited in public areas because it will trigger some health
problems for the smokers
themselves and the passive smokers
, for example
, lung cancer, heart
coroner, heart
disease, stroke, and others because of the bad impact from smokes.Submitted by auzanghiffari on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
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- thirdly
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- moreover
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