In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those crimes?

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Many countries in
this
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world have crimes every single
day
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, and mostly the number of the
crime
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rate increases
day
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by
day
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. There are several reasons why the
crime
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rate increases and there are
also
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solutions that
people
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can take to tackle the problems.
Firstly
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, it is about public facility conditions
which
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that
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are not good enough for citizens to feel safe.
For example
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, bus terminals
which
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that
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do not have a
good
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integrated security system and bad
condition
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conditions
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would be a dangerous place with many pickpockets, and bad hypnotizers who can take our wallets or our precious items whenever they have any opportunities to commit the
crime
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.
Secondly
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, it is about
lifestyle
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conditions which drive
people
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to own much
money
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to support
their
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lifestyle
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that they want every
day
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. To have a fancy
lifestyle
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,
people
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must have a lot of
money
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, and for some unfortunate
people
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, it is likely that one of the methods to get the
money
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fast is becoming a thief or a robber or the other criminals so that they can spend the
money
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for their luxurious
lifestyle
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. And
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, it might be that the
people
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are greedy so they want
money
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more illegally by committing a white-collar
crime
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such
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as corruption. Due to the fact that
crime
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rates increase,
people
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have to fight and search for the best solutions to decrease the problems. One of the solutions is having a character-building education since the baby and makes it the main subject at school. The children are taught about positive characters
such
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as respecting other
people
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’s rights and doing charity so that they would have a good character when they grow up to be adults.
Besides
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, the parents have to teach good vibes so their children become good boys or girls in every single moment. Another solution regarding the
crime
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owing to poor public facilities is to improve the security systems by installing CCTV cameras where the highest potential
crime
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might take place. All public facilities must provide a cashless payment system so
people
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do not need to bring their cash to minimize
the
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apply
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crime
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. To sum up,
although
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there are some
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crime
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criminal
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cases which happen in society and the number of cases goes up year by year, there are some ways
people
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can take to prevent the problem from happening.
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