In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those crimes?
Many countries in
this
world have crimes every single Linking Words
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, and mostly the number of the Use synonyms
crime
rate increases Use synonyms
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. There are several reasons why the Use synonyms
crime
rate increases and there are Use synonyms
also
solutions that Linking Words
people
can take to tackle the problems.
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Firstly
, it is about public facility conditions Linking Words
which
are not good enough for citizens to feel safe. Correct pronoun usage
that
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, bus terminals Linking Words
which
do not have a Correct pronoun usage
that
good
integrated security system and bad Change the adjective
well
condition
would be a dangerous place with many pickpockets, and bad hypnotizers who can take our wallets or our precious items whenever they have any opportunities to commit the Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
crime
. Use synonyms
Secondly
, it is about Linking Words
lifestyle
conditions which drive Use synonyms
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the
lifestyle
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day
. To have a fancy Use synonyms
lifestyle
, Use synonyms
people
must have a lot of Use synonyms
money
, and for some unfortunate Use synonyms
people
, it is likely that one of the methods to get the Use synonyms
money
fast is becoming a thief or a robber or the other criminals so that they can spend the Use synonyms
money
for their luxurious Use synonyms
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Lastly
, it might be that the Linking Words
people
are greedy so they want Use synonyms
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crime
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such
as corruption.
Due to the fact that Linking Words
crime
rates increase, Use synonyms
people
have to fight and search for the best solutions to decrease the problems. One of the solutions is having a character-building education since the baby and makes it the main subject at school. The children are taught about positive characters Use synonyms
such
as respecting other Linking Words
people
’s rights and doing charity so that they would have a good character when they grow up to be adults. Use synonyms
Besides
, the parents have to teach good vibes so their children become good boys or girls in every single moment. Another solution regarding the Linking Words
crime
owing to poor public facilities is to improve the security systems by installing CCTV cameras where the highest potential Use synonyms
crime
might take place. All public facilities must provide a cashless payment system so Use synonyms
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do not need to bring their cash to minimize Use synonyms
the
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apply
crime
.
To sum up, Use synonyms
although
there are some Linking Words
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crime
cases which happen in society and the number of cases goes up year by year, there are some ways Replace the word
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people
can take to prevent the problem from happening.Use synonyms
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